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Original Poem: "a salt sea" with Commentary
https://lindas-literary-home.com/2026/10/17/retribution-of-the-potatoes/
Opening four lines:
Kneeling in light falling upon the floor
Suff’ring sorrow harvested through my sin
My guilty heart had opened wide the door
Through which the lustful, greedy spook slipped in